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Something which shouldn't work... but does!

Hey Tonio!
Nice to see you branching off into animation. I was really baffled by this. If someone had come up to me and said 'Wanna see a cartoon of a couple of trees growing.. and thats it' I would of laughed probably, but the way you excecute it is so original... it's something only you would pull off.
You probably don't want to take advice from someone considerably younger than you, but i thought that was nicely done (i didn't think it had glitches at all). Two things I'm not sure on:

1) The beginning, when it says 'Music by so and so etc.', that bit needs music aswell... maybe not big music, just a little tingle so we are prepared for something naturistic and marvelous!

2) Was that all really frame by frame? If it was, jesus how long did it take, or did you just make one tree in a movie clip, and copy n paste, i don't mind if you did that, that's what i'd of done xD

Well done!

TonioMiguel responds:

Yeah, I agree there probably should have been a sound or jingle on the music by part. It was 100 frames and it took about 3 hours I think plus another hour setting up the multiple trees.

Heya, nice work!

I don't understand how your scribble tribute to B got a better score than this? The animation in this is really good, lots of effort went into SC. And i really admire how you got the clock crew sounding voice. I've been trying really hard to get that voice synth in my work, but i can't find it online!

Well done Tonio (or should i call you Anthony?)

'B, b, b, b,b'

TonioMiguel responds:

That's a funny story Gary. My mother decided when I was an infant that I would never be a "Tony". I even had a neighbor who had the same name but went by Tony. What's funnier is when I was little Tony and Anthony were two different names. The program is called Speakonia. If you continue to have problems getting it I will put it on my site for you.

Wowee Nice!

Very well put together for a first real flash, and the intro credits!!!!!

Jesus christ it's been long since i heard that hip hop ejay stuff!

Nice one!

Hey, im not a huge fan on sprites, but that was very good.
Plus, OMFG that Freakazoid thing with 'Candle Jack', i watched that like 8 years ago when i was 7!!! Oh the memories!!

x

-.- I like how i am not in this at all!

Howdy, this is the 'Author' Gary Marston. I did every single thing in this Jordan. And though I do appreciate you risking and submitting this, i wish you would of given me a bit more 'recognition'. At the bottom, where it says 'Other submissions by this author' im not even there! >=(!!!!

Beautifully executed!

Beautifully executed! Beautifully animated, overall a pleasant and lightening flash. This is what all flashes should be like!

I dont understand it...

It's just a bit... weird... I kind of agree, its just the letter B with a redpeating background... it really doesn't make much sense. It was a bit like your 'Sunshine lollypop's' one. I liked that a bit more cos it had audio and the animation was nice when u moved her head and stuff... this was a bit ordinary... sorry...!

TonioMiguel responds:

No, offense taken and I know I could have done much better than this. It was my own little tribute of SBC's 2001 B moment. I did this in actionscript and its pretty simple. If I had done what I had originally made 100 scribbles I may have had people ubset at me for crashing their computers :-)

Fair

Was ok, but some construction:

- A bit too repetitive, think of a funny gag at the end like the light stops working or somehting, or they melt... in the fridge...

- You need a preloader, get one from NG's flash area.

- Animation was nice and sweet, but lots could be done to improve on it... you just had 2 scenes... a black screen (light off) and the frige (light on). Maybe do a shot outside the fridge and you just hear the 2 tofu people saying light on, light off and laughing or something.

Hope that helps!

My favourite thing on newgrounds.

Heya, I've been a fan of the Goodtime merry boys ever since it hit my screen. I never wrote a review for it because i didn't have an account back then, but im just writing this to say how much i love it and how much it means to me. Even though the stories are pointless and the characters are just tellers of the toon, it all comes round to make a fine cartoon. I even made my own series like it in powerpoint. Good job, and all of them are great!

Gaz!

Works on the way: Book-Man Series 2 Episode 2. The Tutorial Collab.

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