CustardCartoonsInc's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Anti Virus 2 - BETA 1]

Nice game.

It's always good to see people improving on their previous pieces of work, and this is a great improvement.

I think it is a good game, which is 'front page' worthy - if you could just fix a few things.

I don't particularly think the previous suggestion of a 'High Score' board will help, but i think, if you just lay it out a bit nicer.

Make the menu's be simple, with perhaps like... challenges? Like 'Shoot the limewire virus that will fly past' or 'Shoot 100 red windows icons in 2 minutes'. Stuff like that (you could have the normal game ontop i suppose).

And make the game a bit more laid out. For example, don't have too much going on at once, just have your gun, and the things floating past. Thats it (maybe a timer of course).

Finally, i think perhaps just a few cutscenes of animation -

And then you've got something front page worthy.

If this review is sounding critical, i apologise, it's not meant to be.

You've got a good talent for making games, keep it up. I look forward to seeing your further work and improvements.

Gary Marston

sambondashus responds:

thanks for the ideas, i will keep all this in mind when (if) i make an anti virus 3.

[The Paper Cup]

I rarely ever leave many reviews anymore...

But this was just fantastic. I really, really loved it, and i think I'm going to favourite it because it was just so lovely.

When you put: 'Probably most of Newground's users will say:"This game sucks,bad graphics etc."Sorry,the next time I'll try to improve it.' I really did expect the worst, but I'm really happy to say that that was a brilliant first attempt at flash.

The art was unique - like paper animation, i loved the menu where you could select your racer, xD I liked Godiva cos of the queen song. And it was nice, i was like 10th position half the race, then like, i caught up, and some how i managed to get to second place.

Really, really nice bit of flash - I really think this deserves a front page because Tom Fulp needs to know about you xD I think you have a good career ahead of yourself!

Gary Marston
Custard
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CptFoley responds:

This was a great review.If,I'll make more games,please post.You are a good friend,thank you for this nice review.And I liked when you said "Really, really nice bit of flash - I really think this deserves a front page because Tom Fulp needs to know about you xD I think you have a good career ahead of yourself!"
Thank you very much!

[WebCam Face Painter 2.0]

Great improvement!

I think that is the great thing about flash artists like you Tonio. You don't give up, you take the constructive Criticism and work on it.

It's pretty much perfect now (apart from there is no colour black in the panal).

Also, i really like your animation at the start! You can do proper animation now!

(P.S This sould be in a PM but i would really like to work with you xD)

Keep up the good work!

TonioMiguel responds:

Yeah, my first version definitely left some things to be asked for. I wouldn't let the new one come out until I fixed the webcam image capture.

[WebCam Face Painter]

Nice one tonio!

Nice one tonio! I never knew you had your own toons! This is very nicely done, i just hope it isnt pervy xD. (Book-Man 5 shortly too!)

Nice job!

Gazza

TonioMiguel responds:

Well, yes I have 3.5 years of programming skills at my disposal. No, this game is not gated so the only person who gets to enjoy it is the person with their webcam. I am glad you liked it. I am in hopes to put together some actually flash movies soon. I have some strange ideas in my head one based on my times substitute teaching and another about NGs but time will tell. I will be looking forward to Bookman 5.